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Ice Tea Condensation

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I HATE THAT SMUDGE ugghh, but I was in a store and it was a late "this could be a good photo!!" sort of shot so yeah..also the lighting on the right side is NOT FAKED, its how the light was coming in :P

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Taken with: Canon EOS Rebel T3 + 18-55 kit lens
Image size
1191x849px 661.67 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS REBEL T3
Shutter Speed
1/50 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
32 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jun 16, 2012, 1:28:11 PM
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hello, I'm from group #39 from the Feedback Frenzy!

First I would like to say that this is a very neat photo. I like the condensation quite a bit. Also, the brown coloring goes well with the white and blacks to the right.

Some things that you could try to change:
This photo is one that many individuals like to do, so that's why I voted for originality so low. If you added in some extra things like maybe trying to stand above it and drop water droplets near where it is in focus it would definitely make it stand out from normal shots like these.

Second, I'm sure you know but the smudge is quite a bit distracting. Next time I would recommend moving the glass so that you can't see it in the photo.

I also think that if there was more black to the right it would make the photo have a bit more depth to it.

I hope this helped! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>